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We are proud of the fact that over 80% of our business comes from referrals of satisfied clients.

Want proof of our performance? More than 80% of our business comes from referrals by our satisfied clients. In a word, we deliver!

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Care Free Water Conditioners - Salt & Chemical Free/Maintenance free

Hard Water? Easy Solution.
There's a revolutionary new system to condition your water - and it's Care Free!

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New Mexico's Own Ritch's Pecans and Candy Shoppe

Go NUTS!
Enjoy the Ritch Taste of Pecans!

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Come join us and discover ingenious home styling ideas and products that are found in Southern Living at Home and learn about healthy and safe wellness products for your health and home.

Come join your neighbors at a unique home fair, featuring healthy lifestyle and quality products from Shaklee Wellness and Southern Living at Home.

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Extra quality dry-cleaning at reasonable prices is what Value Cleaners is all about

Value Cleaners ~ We value quality

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Call for Entries
(Marketer of the Year Award)

And the Marketer of the Year is . . . You! It could happen!

Did your marketing program net you or your client the exposure you wanted? Then the New Mexico Chapter of the American Marketing Association invites you to EXPOSE YOURSELF at the 14th annual Marketer of the Year Awards and show your peers and prospects how good your work really is! Winners will be celebrated at a gala awards presentation dinner Thursday, September 19, 2002 at the Four Hills Country Club, in Albuquerque, New Mexico. Entries will be exhibited during the Awards Reception at 6 p.m. A video presentation will spotlight the Marketer of the Year in each category. NMAMA invites you to showcase your successful marketing program to the media, your peers, and your prospects.

The New Mexico Chapter of the American Marketing Association is excited to announce its 14th Annual Marketer of the Year Awards. Why enter? In a word, EXPOSURE! Imagine being Marketer of the Year: Press releases, interviews and outstanding publicity from this award will feature your accomplishments. A fine wall plaque will commemorate your success. The Marketer of the Year Awards reception and banquet will be held in your honor on September 19, 2002. During this gala event, you'll receive additional acclaim from your peers and the media as you showcase your successful marketing program. And imagine, too, proudly citing "Marketer of the Year" among your credentials! The only question is, why not enter?

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LARGE LOT

THE GREAT OUTDOORS

Very clean 3BR/2BA w/brick fireplace, newer appliances and upgrades in kitchen, both baths; newly decorated.Cul-de-sac lot backs onto SR creek. $284,900

In your own backyard! Spotless 3BR/2BA; custom décor and upgrades throughout. Huge cul-de-sac lot backs onto SR Creek. $284,900